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Guesswho wrote:

cocokat wrote:

Guesswho wrote:: _{(I'm trying to think of a mentor for Ebonyleaf but I'm thinking maybe Lostwhisker but lol rping with myself will drive me crazy)

Lostwhisker didn't stop, he bounded after the tom and climbed on top to pin him. He aggressively pulled up his paw in the air and swiped his back, he repeated with the other paw until he was continuously raking and raking his back over and over. Blood spattered onto his whiskers. He looked truly insane.}

_{Nighttalon screeched. He rolled onto his back and jerked upwards, slamming back down on top of Lostwhisker.}

_{Lostwhisker reached up with his hind legs and latched onto his belly. He pulled himself up to Nighttalon much like a monkey (mental picture). Full of the taste for blood, Lostwhisker bit down into Nighttalon's neck.

(You can probably beat him up pretty well here)}

_{(Night or Lost?)}

Mothflight wrote:: "Still not responding, eh? Fine." She continued walking.

_{Ripplejaw continued following.}

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_{(Um... wait want to explain DPP to me again XD)}

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Iceleaf scoffed. "And my family said I was stubborn!" She glanced at Ripplejaw.

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Guesswho wrote:: _{(Um... wait want to explain DPP to me again XD)}

_{(It's basically a descriptive paragraph of pain.)}

Mothflight wrote:: Iceleaf scoffed. "And my family said I was stubborn!" She glanced at Ripplejaw.

_{Ripplejaw ignored her, even though he felt her comment sting his ears.}

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_{(Ah okay-- you can do a DPP then if you want-- Lost can really rough him up since fire is really his best fighting advantage

Also, you should listen to 'Shatter Me' by Lindsey Stirling-- It describes, to me, Lost's inner thoughts. It's a really good song)}

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_{(Will do. And I can't do a DPP unless I have a bit more from Lost's side.)}

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"Really? You're ignoring me, too?"

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Mothflight wrote:: "Really? You're ignoring me, too?"

_Yes.

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_{(I know hold on )}

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She took his silence as a yes. "Well, what did I do!? I can understand Flameclaw, but why me!?"

"Hey! I can hear you!"

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Mothflight wrote:: She took his silence as a yes. "Well, what did I do!? I can understand Flameclaw, but why me!?"

"Hey! I can hear you!"

_{Still, he ignored her.}

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She sighed and decided to walk beside Flameclaw. "I had no idea he could be so stubborn."

Flameclaw scoffed. "You don't know the half of it."

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_{She-cats are way more stubborn than toms.}

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_{(Longest silence treatment ever :O)

Lostwhisker twisted his hind legs and slammed Nighttalon onto a flaming branch. He removed his teeth, or rather fangs, from Nighttalon's neck and gripped his foreleg at the ankle. He used all his force and pulled up- pulling the bone out socket. He once again leaped up and landed his full weight on the popped out bone. It cracked under the pressure. He grasped Nighttalon's chin in his mouth and crunched down with all the force in his jaw and pulled outward. His claws brutishly raked into his neck and pulled them up to the tom's eyes where he held them over them for a time before dug a claw in..

(Ouch that's gotta hurt)}

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_{(They are just padding along while Nighttalon is getting his limbs torn from him nbd)}

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(xD)

"So… how'd he get to you?"

Flameclaw shrugged. "The typical way."

"Promised you power?"

"Yup."

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Guesswho wrote:: _{(Longest silence treatment ever :O)

Lostwhisker twisted his hind legs and slammed Nighttalon onto a flaming branch. He removed his teeth, or rather fangs, from Nighttalon's neck and gripped his foreleg at the ankle. He used all his force and pulled up- pulling the bone out socket. He once again leaped up and landed his full weight on the popped out bone. It cracked under the pressure. He grasped Nighttalon's chin in his mouth and crunched down with all the force in his jaw and pulled outward. His claws brutishly raked into his neck and pulled them up to the tom's eyes where he held them over them for a time before dug a claw in..

(Ouch that's gotta hurt)}

_{(Ow. Nice DPP anyways xD)

Nighttalon yowled in agony as Lostwhisker dug his claws into his eyes. The fire that he had been shoved into was slowly consuming him, burning away his fur and the flesh beneath. Blood pulsed from his wounds, which hurt so bad no words could ever describe it. Flames lapped around his wounds, making the pain infinitely worse. His broken leg went completely numb, as did most of his body. He could feel himself fading, slowly disintegrating into nothingness.}

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Mothflight wrote:: (xD)

"So… how'd he get to you?"

Flameclaw shrugged. "The typical way."

"Promised you power?"

"Yup."

_{Ripplejaw listened.}

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Flameclaw continued. "He seduced me, we had a few kits, they left the Clan to live lives of their own, then I was banished."

"For what?"

She shrugged. "Tried to kill the deputy. Of course, it didn't work."

"Oh."

(This is so awkward. xD)

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_{Lostwhisker dug in harder and used his hind legs to scrape the skin beneath his fur. The flames raced closer and touched every part of them and the heat engulfed them.}

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Mothflight wrote:: Flameclaw continued. "He seduced me, we had a few kits, they left the Clan to live lives of their own, then I was banished."

"For what?"

She shrugged. "Tried to kill the deputy. Of course, it didn't work."

"Oh."

(This is so awkward. xD)

_{Ripplejaw kept jumping along.}

Guesswho wrote:: _{Lostwhisker dug in harder and used his hind legs to scrape the skin beneath his fur. The flames raced closer and touched every part of them and the heat engulfed them.}

_{Nighttalon wasn't even aware of what Lostwhisker was doing. As blackness engulfed him, he figured he was pretty much dead.}

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"How long will he keep ignoring us?" Iceleaf asked.

"I'd give it a quarter-moon."

Iceleaf only shrugged.

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_{Some faith she has in me.}

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_{Lostwhisker felt Nighttalon's body go limp and the muscles twitched. Oh S*** the kid is dying(I starred that out myself) He thought. Panicked, he dragged the tom out of the flames into clean forest. He quickly focused healing on him and it held him on the verge of dying but he could drag him all the way from it.}

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_{(It's okay, he won't die XD)}