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Admin Posts : 443 Join date : 2014-04-16 Age : 23

Guesswho wrote:: _{Lostwhisker, scoffed "That, my prodigy, was just the take-down." He ripped Nighttalon's skin with his long claws then sunk his- practically fangs- into his neck. The blood pooled in his mouth and with a claw still dug deep into the warriors chest, he flung Nighttalon like a kit into a tree. He didn't stop, he slammed the warrior into the tree repeatedly. The noise echoed through the whole Dark Forest. THUD, THUD THUD. He flung the warrior towards nearby brambles and while in air, he reached out a claw and tore it down his face.}

_{Nighttalon screeched in agony. Blood pounded from his throat, spilling onto his paws. Blood streamed out of the fresh cut on his face. His whole body was on fire. He tried to get up, knowing Lostwhisker was on his way.}

_{(I was thinking Lostwhisker should only heal Night every once in a while- not very often. You know, as part of his "favor".)}

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Mothflight wrote:: She looked at him with interest. "Whatever do you mean?"

_{"Just how far will you go to become the most powerful warrior ever?"}

Child Posts : 39 Join date : 2014-07-02

"I have a special assignment for you today, Darkclaw." Gorsefoot purred, winding himself around the young tom. "A very special assignment..."

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~**///Wishbreeze**~ wrote:: "I have a special assignment for you today, Darkclaw." Gorsefoot purred, winding himself around the young tom. "A very special assignment..."

_{(Are you going to add some gore to the possession? Cause it would be interesting to see something other than just smoke.)}

_{Darkclaw pricked his ears, interested. "An assignment? Really?"}

Politician Posts : 317 Join date : 2014-07-02 Age : 26

cocokat wrote:

Mothflight wrote:: She looked at him with interest. "Whatever do you mean?"

_{"Just how far will you go to become the most powerful warrior ever?"}

Her eyes narrowed. "I will be sure to kill all who stand in my way to become the leader of my Clan! That includes Crowstar and his pesky mate!" She honestly didn't know whether she would actually do this.

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Mothflight wrote:

cocokat wrote:

Mothflight wrote:: She looked at him with interest. "Whatever do you mean?"

_{"Just how far will you go to become the most powerful warrior ever?"}

Her eyes narrowed. "I will be sure to kill all who stand in my way to become the leader of my Clan! That includes Crowstar and his pesky mate!" She honestly didn't know whether she would actually do this.

_{"I see uncertainty in your eyes. Tell me what you really will do."}

Toddler Posts : 12 Join date : 2014-07-02

[ Oh wicked ]

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Icefire wrote:: [ Oh wicked ]

_{(Yup. And the fact that it is PG-15 makes it more entertaining xD)}

Citizen Posts : 157 Join date : 2014-07-02 Age : 27

_{(Such favor, much gracious XD XD)

Lostwhisker sprinted at the tom in full speed. He latched his sharp teeth into the tom's back left achilles tendon and clenched with the full power of his jaws. Lostwhisker set his claws on Nighttalon's stomach and stretched his body out, running his claws deeper into his stomach. His claw continued until his claw wrapped around his neck and dug in harder, "Close enough to death yet? Too bad!" He snarled, his dark amber eyes turning crazy for the thirst for blood.

(Much gore, might need to look away for the next part XD Its not crazy gruesome but eh, sounds like it fricken hurts)

With the achilles tendon still in his grip with his teeth, he tore the tendon away from the bone.}

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cocokat wrote:

Mothflight wrote:

cocokat wrote:

Mothflight wrote:: She looked at him with interest. "Whatever do you mean?"

_{"Just how far will you go to become the most powerful warrior ever?"}

Her eyes narrowed. "I will be sure to kill all who stand in my way to become the leader of my Clan! That includes Crowstar and his pesky mate!" She honestly didn't know whether she would actually do this.

_{"I see uncertainty in your eyes. Tell me what you really will do."}

_{(Maybe he needs to run her through some Lostwhisker training XD Or she will have to train with Lostwhisker-- this guys is Death I am sure of it)}

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Guesswho wrote:: _{(Such favor, much gracious XD XD)

Lostwhisker sprinted at the tom in full speed. He latched his sharp teeth into the tom's back left achilles tendon and clenched with the full power of his jaws. Lostwhisker set his claws on Nighttalon's stomach and stretched his body out, running his claws deeper into his stomach. His claw continued until his claw wrapped around his neck and dug in harder, "Close enough to death yet? Too bad!" He snarled, his dark amber eyes turning crazy for the thirst for blood.

(Much gore, might need to look away for the next part XD Its not crazy gruesome but eh, sounds like it fricken hurts)

With the achilles tendon still in his grip with his teeth, he tore the tendon away from the bone.}

_{Pain exploded in Nighttalon's brain. He shrieked in agony. He managed to choke out a plea for more. He felt a strange sense of pleasure ripple up his spine. He was enjoying this? His claws dug deep into the earth. His whole body felt like it was being consumed, but, oddly, he felt no closer to passing out.}

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Guesswho wrote:

cocokat wrote:

Mothflight wrote:

cocokat wrote:

Mothflight wrote:: She looked at him with interest. "Whatever do you mean?"

_{"Just how far will you go to become the most powerful warrior ever?"}

Her eyes narrowed. "I will be sure to kill all who stand in my way to become the leader of my Clan! That includes Crowstar and his pesky mate!" She honestly didn't know whether she would actually do this.

_{"I see uncertainty in your eyes. Tell me what you really will do."}

_{(Maybe he needs to run her through some Lostwhisker training XD Or she will have to train with Lostwhisker-- this guys is Death I am sure of it)}

_(xD)

Toddler Posts : 12 Join date : 2014-07-02

[ Weeeeee. Should I make a new kittay? ]

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Icefire wrote:: [ Weeeeee. Should I make a new kittay? ]

_{(Yeeas, yes you should)}

Politician Posts : 317 Join date : 2014-07-02 Age : 26

(I was actually considering her mentor be Lostwhisker. xD)

Iceleaf growled. With much more confidence, she mewed, "I already told you! I will continue to train here and rise up the ranks of my Clan. Once I have become deputy, I shall kill both Crowstar and Leafpool."

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_{{I'm going to bed. Night}}

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Icefire wrote:: [ Weeeeee. Should I make a new kittay? ]

_(Yes.)

Mothflight wrote:: (I was actually considering her mentor be Lostwhisker. xD)

Iceleaf growled. With much more confidence, she mewed, "I already told you! I will continue to train here and rise up the ranks of my Clan. Once I have become deputy, I shall kill both Crowstar and Leafpool."

_{"Excellent." He purred. "And as leader, what will you do?"}

Citizen Posts : 157 Join date : 2014-07-02 Age : 27

cocokat wrote:

Guesswho wrote:: _{(Such favor, much gracious XD XD)

Lostwhisker sprinted at the tom in full speed. He latched his sharp teeth into the tom's back left achilles tendon and clenched with the full power of his jaws. Lostwhisker set his claws on Nighttalon's stomach and stretched his body out, running his claws deeper into his stomach. His claw continued until his claw wrapped around his neck and dug in harder, "Close enough to death yet? Too bad!" He snarled, his dark amber eyes turning crazy for the thirst for blood.

(Much gore, might need to look away for the next part XD Its not crazy gruesome but eh, sounds like it fricken hurts)

With the achilles tendon still in his grip with his teeth, he tore the tendon away from the bone.}

_{Pain exploded in Nighttalon's brain. He shrieked in agony. He managed to choke out a plea for more. He felt a strange sense of pleasure ripple up his spine. He was enjoying this? His claws dug deep into the earth. His whole body felt like it was being consumed, but, oddly, he felt no closer to passing out.}

_{Lostwhisker used all his brain power to keep Nighttalon awake, to make him stronger. He then slid under the tom to pull him to his feet. He dipped down and clenched his right paw in his jaw then kicked with his hind legs onto Nighttalon's belly to pull the front leg out of socket. Releasing the leg from his mouth he scrambled up a tree- pushed off and twisted his body to land square on Nighttalon's shoulder- the same one he just pulled out of socket. His claws dug into the shoulder and under his body pressure, he heard a snap.

(Pretty sure a bone broke here )}

Citizen Posts : 157 Join date : 2014-07-02 Age : 27

Mothflight wrote:: (I was actually considering her mentor be Lostwhisker. xD)

Iceleaf growled. With much more confidence, she mewed, "I already told you! I will continue to train here and rise up the ranks of my Clan. Once I have become deputy, I shall kill both Crowstar and Leafpool."

_{(Wonder if she could handle the pain- she may have needed some prep work before training with him XD)}

Politician Posts : 317 Join date : 2014-07-02 Age : 26

"I shall become powerful! Even StarClan themselves will fear me! Then I shall gather my strongest warriors and destroy those other Clans the reside by the lake!"

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Guesswho wrote:

cocokat wrote:

Guesswho wrote:: _{(Such favor, much gracious XD XD)

Lostwhisker sprinted at the tom in full speed. He latched his sharp teeth into the tom's back left achilles tendon and clenched with the full power of his jaws. Lostwhisker set his claws on Nighttalon's stomach and stretched his body out, running his claws deeper into his stomach. His claw continued until his claw wrapped around his neck and dug in harder, "Close enough to death yet? Too bad!" He snarled, his dark amber eyes turning crazy for the thirst for blood.

(Much gore, might need to look away for the next part XD Its not crazy gruesome but eh, sounds like it fricken hurts)

With the achilles tendon still in his grip with his teeth, he tore the tendon away from the bone.}

_{Pain exploded in Nighttalon's brain. He shrieked in agony. He managed to choke out a plea for more. He felt a strange sense of pleasure ripple up his spine. He was enjoying this? His claws dug deep into the earth. His whole body felt like it was being consumed, but, oddly, he felt no closer to passing out.}

_{Lostwhisker used all his brain power to keep Nighttalon awake, to make him stronger. He then slid under the tom to pull him to his feet. He dipped down and clenched his right paw in his jaw then kicked with his hind legs onto Nighttalon's belly to pull the front leg out of socket. Releasing the leg from his mouth he scrambled up a tree- pushed off and twisted his body to land square on Nighttalon's shoulder- the same one he just pulled out of socket. His claws dug into the shoulder and under his body pressure, he heard a snap.

(Pretty sure a bone broke here )}

_(Yup.)

_{Nighttalon hissed as he felt his shoulder break. His legs gave way, and he fell into a pool of his own blood. He could feel energy surging through his veins, silently begging Lostwhisker for more. He wanted power, and his father had convinced him that pain was the key to reaching it.}

Politician Posts : 317 Join date : 2014-07-02 Age : 26

Guesswho wrote:

Mothflight wrote:: (I was actually considering her mentor be Lostwhisker. xD)

Iceleaf growled. With much more confidence, she mewed, "I already told you! I will continue to train here and rise up the ranks of my Clan. Once I have become deputy, I shall kill both Crowstar and Leafpool."

_{(Wonder if she could handle the pain- she may have needed some prep work before training with him XD)}

(xDl Perhaps)

Admin Posts : 443 Join date : 2014-04-16 Age : 23

Mothflight wrote:: "I shall become powerful! Even StarClan themselves will fear me! Then I shall gather my strongest warriors and destroy those other Clans the reside by the lake!"

_{"Prove to me that you are being honest- that you will carry out these plans."}

Toddler Posts : 12 Join date : 2014-07-02

[ should it be a DF cat orrrr
O.o ]

Child Posts : 39 Join date : 2014-07-02

(yeah, i will, because in my opinion, each DF warrior has a different way of posessing)

"Yes...first, you need to sharpen your claws and stretch, to prepare for this mission."